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2024-04-09 20:40

(review on 30th chapter) Good story, the plot is really interesting. Like, how MLs will impress Louise? He seems to be quite cold at first. But after reading the recent chapter, I think there is hope for MLs...... Although it's a little bit angst at some points, it has good amount of fluff. Character development is not bad. There are some minor grammar mistakes but they are quite non-existent if we don't look carefully. I would like this finish this whole book.

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