Review Detail of Saurabh_Mehta_0129 in I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
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bloated. so many words to convey so less. it's better than most of the trash here. It keeps going on and on and the story barely moves forward. Reading this feels like a chore
I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
RighteousFilth
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I'm sorry, looks like the first thirty chapters really is the problem, since I was still trying to get a good grip on this whole writing stuff. I apologize if it stressed you out. I'm more of a novice author and this book was my way of getting a lot of things in place, while I do promise that it gets better, I have also seen the necessity to really touch and edit the first thirty chapters. Thank you very much for the review.
Author, I commend you for responding to all reviews and natures of criticism on your work. It is a step novices must take for improvement. However, I wholeheartedly recommend dropping this story as soon as possible and working on a well-crafted one for your next work. Use the experience you have gained in writing this novel to jumpstart a different one. I am only giving this recommendation because your story isn’t unique in nature. Even if your writing quality and substance improves over time, there will be no escape from the initial 100 chapters in this novel that are lacking in quality. The only option is to write something new. Should you decide instead to rewrite the entire thing, I would redo some of the concept and further develop core character design.
RighteousFilth:I'm sorry, looks like the first thirty chapters really is the problem, since I was still trying to get a good grip on this whole writing stuff. I apologize if it stressed you out. I'm more of a novice author and this book was my way of getting a lot of things in place, while I do promise that it gets better, I have also seen the necessity to really touch and edit the first thirty chapters. Thank you very much for the review.
Thank you very much, I appreciate your comment but I also think I'd love to see how far this book can go. I think one of what we authors owe our works is loyalty against all odds.
novelmeister:Author, I commend you for responding to all reviews and natures of criticism on your work. It is a step novices must take for improvement. However, I wholeheartedly recommend dropping this story as soon as possible and working on a well-crafted one for your next work. Use the experience you have gained in writing this novel to jumpstart a different one. I am only giving this recommendation because your story isn’t unique in nature. Even if your writing quality and substance improves over time, there will be no escape from the initial 100 chapters in this novel that are lacking in quality. The only option is to write something new. Should you decide instead to rewrite the entire thing, I would redo some of the concept and further develop core character design.
novelmeister:Author, I commend you for responding to all reviews and natures of criticism on your work. It is a step novices must take for improvement. However, I wholeheartedly recommend dropping this story as soon as possible and working on a well-crafted one for your next work. Use the experience you have gained in writing this novel to jumpstart a different one. I am only giving this recommendation because your story isn’t unique in nature. Even if your writing quality and substance improves over time, there will be no escape from the initial 100 chapters in this novel that are lacking in quality. The only option is to write something new. Should you decide instead to rewrite the entire thing, I would redo some of the concept and further develop core character design.
I’d consider myself well-read, but each of us likes our own cliches and fantasies, meaning to recommend something to you I need to know what stories you enjoy. I’ll reccomend you some of my best stories in turn, both on this platform and off.
LLagier:Eyyy you seem to have read lots of novels, can you recommend any for me pleasee. (Js no harem ty)
I have read and liked birth of the demonic sword, kill the sun, Superhunt, lotm and mother of learning. I’ve read many more but they’re the usual trash of the app.
novelmeister:I’d consider myself well-read, but each of us likes our own cliches and fantasies, meaning to recommend something to you I need to know what stories you enjoy. I’ll reccomend you some of my best stories in turn, both on this platform and off.