It's really going well in the 9 chapters that I'm going through. There is still a lot to be developed, so in the future I will continue updating the review as the story updates and advances. I would give him the highest rating but I see inconsistency in a recent character
Rerian
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LIKEThe last character. The one who can change appearance, I don't remember his name. That character entered a hole, it's like having an uncle of yours come to your house with whom you supposedly lived before but whom you now don't remember anything about. It was only mentioned that such a character is good at hiding and that the Mc gave him the money. What made him not run away with the money in his pockets? But how did the MC manage to contact him and convince him. I could go on, but this is getting long. I hope you can understand where my doubt is exactly and why I say it is incongruous.
Rerian:whats's the inconsistency?
ah my bad I forgot to address that in this chapter he's the head of the information guild, mc just went to the guild and gave them a secret code. Also the reason he didn't run away with the money is that he has to give it to Cassius as long as he's alive due to a magic contract that's why he tries to kill him in the next chapter that I haven't uploaded yet
Mart_Ero:The last character. The one who can change appearance, I don't remember his name. That character entered a hole, it's like having an uncle of yours come to your house with whom you supposedly lived before but whom you now don't remember anything about. It was only mentioned that such a character is good at hiding and that the Mc gave him the money. What made him not run away with the money in his pockets? But how did the MC manage to contact him and convince him. I could go on, but this is getting long. I hope you can understand where my doubt is exactly and why I say it is incongruous.
I understand, but don't think I'm trying to kill him so lightly because of who his parents are. That he handles things with caution because of who his parents are and their possible reactions. Not just acting stupid
Rerian:ah my bad I forgot to address that in this chapter he's the head of the information guild, mc just went to the guild and gave them a secret code. Also the reason he didn't run away with the money is that he has to give it to Cassius as long as he's alive due to a magic contract that's why he tries to kill him in the next chapter that I haven't uploaded yet
Rerian:ah my bad I forgot to address that in this chapter he's the head of the information guild, mc just went to the guild and gave them a secret code. Also the reason he didn't run away with the money is that he has to give it to Cassius as long as he's alive due to a magic contract that's why he tries to kill him in the next chapter that I haven't uploaded yet
when does Lyra show up? i hope you don't wait too long before she shows up. oh btw she is first place now.
Rerian:whats's the inconsistency?
I've already done a flashback where Cas met Lyra in his first life but that doesn't count since she's *very* different in this life.
Malcolm_Massey:when does Lyra show up? i hope you don't wait too long before she shows up. oh btw she is first place now.
Malcolm_Massey:when does Lyra show up? i hope you don't wait too long before she shows up. oh btw she is first place now.
Rerian:Also bro, why did you give her so many points when she hasn't been properly introduced yet đ
probably because this time he will meet her before a certain situation that changed her personality in the original timeline?
Rerian:I've already done a flashback where Cas met Lyra in his first life but that doesn't count since she's *very* different in this life.
not quite. things have already changed... she went missing in this timeline two days before his awakening ceremony but in his past life he met her there. He hadn't regressed yet by then.
Malcolm_Massey:probably because this time he will meet her before a certain situation that changed her personality in the original timeline?