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Rerian3dCommentedif it's not obvious yet, I'm switching to first pov from Cassius's perspective. I will still write like the previous chapter on some occasions depending on how much of the scene I want to cover. don't worry though, Cassius is observant and reflective so it almost feels like he's narrating his own story as it happens. 😂
I wake up in a dimly lit room that feels oddly familiar. Even in the darkness, I can tell this bedroom is too fancy for a useless illegitimate child like me.- Rerian5dReplied to Malcolm_Massey
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Kar was the emperor 600 years ago tho. it's been a long time...
"Ohh, young boy. You look just like emperor Karavan did when he was younger." An old lady who was sitting in a fancy mahogany lounge chair, near a grand oak desk said, while trying to point at Cassius with her weak finger, and smiling faintly. - Rerian5dReplied to Malcolm_Massey
They say elementalist, but who knows?
These 4 dukedoms are now known as the founding families. Because they were the beginning of the new empire that we have now - the Karavan empire. Named after crown prince Karavan the first ever S-rank. - Rerian6dReplied to Hardy1j
yep.
He sat down on the seat and after taking the lid off, he took out the cupcake that was inside. This was a cupcake Anna made for him. - Rerian6dReplied to Hardy1j
it was said that he never considered it. even now, he wasn't considering it he was just being anxious. it's like when you go to your parents asking "Will you still love me if I fail my exams?" You know the answer will be yes but you ask anyways.
Those words put Cassius at ease, but there was still another question that kept biting him at the back of his heart: Will you still love me if I don't awaken? - Rerian6dCommented
he went to get the milk. literally.
The moment she showed signs of being pregnant, the man abandoned her, saying that he was going to buy milk. It was the last time she saw him and why she raised her son alone. - Rerian6dCommented
💀 his first thought was putting his fingers in the baby's mouth?
But what could he do? His only possible interactions were with the baby, and he doubted that putting his finger in his mouth would do anything to help him with his plight. - Rerian7dCommented
why quote marks?
'Irregular?' - Rerian8dCommented
bad exposition it's too confusing
In the cruel silence of the scalding dry heat in the middle of Africa, near the borders of the West. The ground was covered in cracks from the lack of moisture that would have been a blessing from the skies. - Rerian8dReplied to novelmeister
oh ok, I agree. When I originally wrote this novel I didn't know about POV and simply followed the way the only novel I had read at the time structured it which was the third POV for the first chap and the first POV present for the rest then I realized I could switch to the third pov even after the first chapter so I did but I couldn't edit the chapters in the middle because they didn't fit well in third pov. there was simply too much internal monologue.
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it's more of a rhetorical thought of "wow the emperor gets information fast. makes sense considering this is the imperial palace. "
'Just how fast does word travel?' Cassius wondered. 'We came here as soon as the awakening ceremony ended.' - Rerian10dReplied to Snow_Truff
because it just doesn't
PS: Pasta doesn't exist in this world. - Rerian11dReplied to Hardy1jCh 13 Fake system
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my mom said the same thing except I always kept refusing to donate my dolls and one day I woke up with my dolls gone 😭 eventually I came to the same conclusion as wonhee. (kinda. I still wanted my dolls though.)
"When I was a child, it was hard for me to let go of the dolls that my parents wanted me to donate to the less fortunate kids. Every time I acted up like a spoiled brat, my parents would remind me that I shouldn't be greedy– that I should be generous because it's the only way I could show my gratitude for being born lucky," Wonhee said, reminiscing about her childhood. "Once I understood that it was better for the dolls to be donated so other children could play with them than keep them hidden in my playroom, I let them go completely." - Rerian11dCommented
he's called ruda cuz he's rude
Ruda, who clearly got Wonhee's message, suddenly looked cold.