This story is really well written and intriguing. There are some spelling errors but only a little bit. I like how the main character acts he’s not dumb and is pretty calculating. The way the mc interacts with other people is pretty good and he isn’t super serious all the time. He isn’t afraid to kill and does it without batting an eye. The story is kind of mid paced it’s been 40 chapters and it’s only been like 3 days but the story is written well enough that you don’t even feel like it’s been slow. There’s a lot of dialogue/banter which can get overused but not to the point you drop the story I think that’s really the only downside of this novel. We really haven’t gotten to the point where u can really tell if the system is useful because he has only gotten one reward that really changed his strength since we really don’t know how strong he is yet.
Liked it!
LIKEOhh and if this reviewer has bad grammar and it sounds like I’m yapping my bad I wrote this at 5:57 am and I haven’t slept yet so yea goodnight folks.
Thanks for the review mate, I was a little busy with exams and all so couldn't reply. I actually agree with your points and trying to improve them. For spelling mistake and all, I'm editing all the chapters from the starting. Story is slow paced, I agree but it'll be interesting, that I can promise. If you have anything else, then you can tell me, I'll improve. Thanks for reading, and hope you like the novel
