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Never passed out but definitely felt lightheaded before

I honestly think you should change this to path instead of having it under talent

Still haven’t explained this

I thought you could not bring things like this outside

You have to explain this legendary thing because if it’s the best path why are you making it seem something is over it

I don’t understand this . So is there different type of talent paths? Like is there a common version of bloodline plant and a legendary version or is bloodline plant just automatically legendary . Because you only taught us plant , bloodline and bloodline plant . You said plant and bloodline or equal so there’s no point in having a category for common and rare .

Yeah everything just makes you cringe right . If the writing was planned out better this would actually be enjoyable.

Author if you timed this better it wouldn’t be so cringe they’ve barely known eachother you should it made it that he was with them longer so the emotions could actually feel real instead of cringe . So far you haven’t made the characters easy to connect with . I’ve only felt cringe

You do realize he didn’t need to do the awakening there he was selfish he already knew the system was going to help but to keep his secret he used them