Can’t get behind this fic. Don’t know why it focuses so much on Sawamura instead of developing the MC. It’s like the mc is a side character

the story has an original main character but does not focus on the MC the story focuses on Sawamura so change the fanfic name to Diamond no Ace: suck Sawamura b*lls and be an Extra basically is this. Now

I’ll agree to the other reviewers. However, they could’ve been more constructive and less rude floor how they put it. We are here to see what your character does, not other characters. I get how it can be difficult but it’s the truth. If you need more content for your MC then give him a romantic relationship. Focus on specific friendships, how there is strain on some friendships because of the ruthless selection for the first string ect. Overall it’s not bad. But let’s focus on your character everyone else are background.

Writing Quality is great, Character design is also good, but the only problem is this story doesn't focus on MC at all, in all 31 chapters MC gets less screentime than all the characters, even with all these we have to wait for 1 week for the new chapter.

Finally there is a new fanfic about DnA. I hope your novel will have a good ranking

Por el momento me parece bien algo fresco nada de sistemas me parece bien y sobre todo se entiende perfectamente la lectura me gustaría q fuera un poco más largos los caps pero está muy bien