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Cam82938
Cam82938Lv47mth
2024-07-17 01:18

Can’t get behind this fic. Don’t know why it focuses so much on Sawamura instead of developing the MC. It’s like the mc is a side character

Diamond no Ace: Prince of Hitter

Zeta_Faes
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32 Chs

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nobody189
nobody189Lv4

yeah title should be diamond no ace ft prince of hitter,

7mth
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Divin_Prime
Divin_PrimeLv4

indeed

nobody189:yeah title should be diamond no ace ft prince of hitter,
6mth
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Clown_Of_God
Clown_Of_GodLv6

the story has an original main character but does not focus on the MC the story focuses on Sawamura so change the fanfic name to Diamond no Ace: suck Sawamura b*lls and be an Extra basically is this. Now

7mth

Blueflameh
BlueflamehLv15

I’ll agree to the other reviewers. However, they could’ve been more constructive and less rude floor how they put it. We are here to see what your character does, not other characters. I get how it can be difficult but it’s the truth. If you need more content for your MC then give him a romantic relationship. Focus on specific friendships, how there is strain on some friendships because of the ruthless selection for the first string ect. Overall it’s not bad. But let’s focus on your character everyone else are background.

6mth
Divin_Prime
Divin_PrimeLv4

Writing Quality is great, Character design is also good, but the only problem is this story doesn't focus on MC at all, in all 31 chapters MC gets less screentime than all the characters, even with all these we have to wait for 1 week for the new chapter.

6mth
VIP2001
VIP2001Lv14

Good fanfic deserve more views It is a shame that the update is not constant

6mth
Javeron
JaveronLv4

Finally there is a new fanfic about DnA. I hope your novel will have a good ranking

9mth
Daoist1Qs3v2
Daoist1Qs3v2Lv1

Por el momento me parece bien algo fresco nada de sistemas me parece bien y sobre todo se entiende perfectamente la lectura me gustaría q fuera un poco más largos los caps pero está muy bien

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