"Now there are nine reviews so it should be the time to post one of mine...
Everything about the story, I've said in the description and auxiliary chapter so I won't write it here.
I'll just share my views in brief:
To be honest, I quite liked this fanfic when I read it, even more than the other one.
Of course, yellow hair destruction can't be matched by anyone, but the thing I liked about it is the protagonist.
He isn't exactly good or bad but a mixture of both.
Anything else is a spoiler, so I won't write.
As for the bad aspects of it, it would be too descriptive.
Every girl is described in detail, not to mention her face, body, even her toes and nails, as if she is some heavenly maiden and this kind of thing happens everytime.
Even when she is talking, like 'she squeezed her watermelons and looked at him.'
But for those experienced people who have read too much novels from Xianxia, and Wuxia genres, it should not be a big problem.
After all, the descriptions in them are also a bit.
As for grammar and mistakes...
Well, I'm in the middle of my exams, which have been going on since February, so I couldn't exactly check everything in detail.
Of course, I'm trying to do my best I can in the time I can spare.
After exams, I'll edit these chapters and try to improve the grammar and translation."
