"Now there are nine reviews so it should be the time to post one of mine... Everything about the story, I've said in the description and auxiliary chapter so I won't write it here. I'll just share my views in brief: To be honest, I quite liked this fanfic when I read it, even more than the other one. Of course, yellow hair destruction can't be matched by anyone, but the thing I liked about it is the protagonist. He isn't exactly good or bad but a mixture of both. Anything else is a spoiler, so I won't write. As for the bad aspects of it, it would be too descriptive. Every girl is described in detail, not to mention her face, body, even her toes and nails, as if she is some heavenly maiden and this kind of thing happens everytime. Even when she is talking, like 'she squeezed her watermelons and looked at him.' But for those experienced people who have read too much novels from Xianxia, and Wuxia genres, it should not be a big problem. After all, the descriptions in them are also a bit. As for grammar and mistakes... Well, I'm in the middle of my exams, which have been going on since February, so I couldn't exactly check everything in detail. Of course, I'm trying to do my best I can in the time I can spare. After exams, I'll edit these chapters and try to improve the grammar and translation."

you say there's no ÑTR but LOL this family is cursed! can you promise this cuz I ain't going to lie this story traumatizes you more than any other ñ./TR

Dude, 50% of the 80 chapters of this Fanfic are like the first day of school, the slow pace is OK, but spending 2 or 3 months in real life on the first day of school is enough to kill any reader

Just very very bad grammar, I couldn't understand what was going on at all. Read 12 chapters and gave up.

Hopefully there's no NTR, I'm quite traumatized. Yes, whatever it is, let the MC have the power to protect his women even from a distance. It would be great if the MC had a side job that made a lot of money, then bought a house and let his women live there.

It is a Chinese translation, but every good parts of this was lost... And you got a Japanese - like slice of life for this. Is it good? Don't know... The only question that I have, which part of this was "passionate" ?

author what happened did you drop this novel

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Estoy asustado, he leído comentarios perturbadores, pero no estoy seguro de si correr el riesgo... Que diablos pasó en la playa? Y porque todos se niegan a hablar de ello?!! 😱 Mi curiosidad me mata, pero también mato al gato, y no quiero correr riesgos!!!