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Imjustadev
ImjustadevLv42mth
2024-09-24 19:21

Definitely written using A.I, also he got knocked out by Barry saying hi to him, woke up a week later at stra labs and suddenly he's a "hero" now named velocity, despite him not having ANY plans or aspirations to become one. there are several plot holes throughout the story (which is another telltale of AI).

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Charlotte_Mage
Charlotte_MageAuthor

well I did use chat to correct some things in the beginning but I didn't like it, so I took a break for a while, but my later chapters are better, and I would like you to explain which plot holes please so I can fix them, or leave them if it's part of the story, and well the hero thing was just a whim, but you need to realize he was an ordinary person before, so his thought is, rather be with them than against them in this messed up world

Imjustadev
ImjustadevLv4

ok, I'll read till the latest chapter, and if it's really better than the first ones I'll delete my review and leave a new one, I'll also make a list of all the plot holes I found

Charlotte_Mage
Charlotte_MageAuthor

thank you!

Imjustadev:ok, I'll read till the latest chapter, and if it's really better than the first ones I'll delete my review and leave a new one, I'll also make a list of all the plot holes I found
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