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khazar
khazarLv56mth
2024-09-23 03:24

fandic ? wc tv show ? yeah pass. .

Speeding Through Shadows: A Flash of Rebirth

Charlotte_Mage
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Charlotte_Mage
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if it's a pass and you didn't even dead it, why did you rate? that's some next level bullshit. Please either delete your review or dead the thing, then give me some constructive criticism I can use to improve.

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ArthasMenethil
ArthasMenethilLv4

He is a troll dont mind him. I will give my review soon

Charlotte_Mage:if it's a pass and you didn't even dead it, why did you rate? that's some next level bullshit. Please either delete your review or dead the thing, then give me some constructive criticism I can use to improve.
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khazar
khazarLv5

well i "dead" a few chapters and the answer is no I'm not doing any of that

Charlotte_Mage:if it's a pass and you didn't even dead it, why did you rate? that's some next level bullshit. Please either delete your review or dead the thing, then give me some constructive criticism I can use to improve.
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khazar
khazarLv5

nope just your casual reader

ArthasMenethil:He is a troll dont mind him. I will give my review soon
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khazar
khazarLv5

honestly the idea is good the execution is crab it's too fast paced. the mc is too op he is like a gamer on steroids. but honestly could have been worse

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Charlotte_Mage
Charlotte_MageAuthor

True, but he isn't as fast as Barry, the main reason why he is "leveing up" his skills so fast is mainly because of the super speed which is a cheat with his power of learning, and since it's not a system he won't get random rewards for doing something he didn't intend to do.

khazar:honestly the idea is good the execution is crab it's too fast paced. the mc is too op he is like a gamer on steroids. but honestly could have been worse
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David_Bendeck
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author-sama, don't give so many details about everything and just get to the point with things since at this rate more than 100 chapters will pass and we will only be at the beginning of the story and in the end because of so many details we will not understand even half of the things that are happening in the story

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Imjustadev
ImjustadevLv4

Definitely written using A.I, also he got knocked out by Barry saying hi to him, woke up a week later at stra labs and suddenly he's a "hero" now named velocity, despite him not having ANY plans or aspirations to become one. there are several plot holes throughout the story (which is another telltale of AI).

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LastGod
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It was really interesting for a while.I thought maybe maybe just once someone was gonna do the right thing. Not join the stupid flash team. A team that has so many members that it's ridiculous. And it was pretty good for a while. He didn't join the flash team.He made money so that he could live a nice life and then he made gadgets. So maybe he could even make his own suit if he wanted to be a hero. Maybe he doesn't want to be a hero. Maybe he wants to make military hardware for fighting meta humans for the cops. but no, he immediately joins the Flash team the second they introduce themselves.

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