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2024-02-03 13:08

Reading at chapter 10, the story is intriguing as you follow Marlene's journey in a cyberpunk world. Here are what I have observed, the chapters seemed short . Despite being short it is descriptive enough to describe the scenes. Its not a bad thing for me but other readers may find it lacking. The story is very engaging, it has a good flow and you can clearly picture out the scenes precisely. There was no dragging chapters, just pure action. I enjoyed this story very much. I am giving this story 5/5 rating because this story depicts Cyberpunk action and the author faithfully described the setting and the characters very well. Thank you for inviting me to review your novel. I wish you the best!

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