Review Detail of Kiradeux in Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

This author doesn't do butterflies; he uses forced plot correction to force them to go away. There's talk about avoiding melodrama and avoiding Dumbledore bashing, but then talks about dumbles doing memory manipulation and what is effectively mind control as if it's a good thing while turning every other character in the story into doormats - and of course, confirms in an author note that he wants the MC to be a doormat too! General suggestion to the author: If you want to just explore the magical world and not worry about shit? Either eliminate MC baggage through non-deus-ex-machina, or make the MC someone else. This method of doing it flattens out the MC's personality for the rest of the story.