Review Detail of HopelessRomantic32 in Reincarnated in the Astral World

I have really enjoyed this story so far, and I find myself looking forward to continuing it. If I was forced to make one small suggestion, it would be that at times the words used during smut scenes like Yeah, come off as a bit odd. It's not something that ever bothered me too much, but just a small suggestion that maybe it could flow a little smoother.