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HopelessRomantic323dPostedI enjoy the novel. If I had to voice a complaint for 40 characters' sake, it would be that chinese names are different variations of dropping spoons down the stairs, and on occasion, I mix them up.. as does the author. :) on a serious note, you've done great writing this story so far, and I wish you luck on your continued writing because I'll be coming along. :P
- HopelessRomantic324dReplied to Akkuzz_69
really..? excellent. i've noticed a particular lack of.. racism from the main character. how can he be chinese without being racist?
But unexpectedly, Zhao Tian's cooking is better than hers. Seeing her reaction, Zhao Tian smiled wryly. Because of his special physique, he can learn anything if he tries it. - HopelessRomantic324dCommentedMei Xiu retracted the mobile from her ear and glanced at the dinner table filled with delicious foods that she had prepared with her own hands for Zhao Tian. Her eyes trembled as a wave of sadness filled her heart and she bit her lips I frustration.
- HopelessRomantic325dCommentedA contemplative sigh left Zhao Suyin's lips and the blish on her face deepened "D-Do you need help from me son?" she asked placing her hand on his crotch.
- HopelessRomantic3220dPosted
While the grammar at times can be a little hard to sift through, its a story that I have absolutely loved following so far, and you've done more then enough to earn another reader for the rest of your time writing this story, I sincerely hope that it gets to the conclusion because you've done an excellent job.
- HopelessRomantic321mthPosted
I have really enjoyed this story so far, and I find myself looking forward to continuing it. If I was forced to make one small suggestion, it would be that at times the words used during smut scenes like Yeah, come off as a bit odd. It's not something that ever bothered me too much, but just a small suggestion that maybe it could flow a little smoother.
- HopelessRomantic321mthCommentedMargaret feels extremely happy and proud, while Anastasia feels the opposite. 'It should have been me in that dress, impressing the prince who would take me away from here... who is this bitch?!'
- HopelessRomantic321mthCommented"Let me think..." The Spearman makes a fake thoughtful expression. "We're going to beat the shit out of you, and then use your pretty body like a dirty whore... maybe you'll end up liking it, who knows?"
- HopelessRomantic321mthCommented
r-r-rat BAKA!
"Piss, why?" Rat responds in an arrogant tone and points to his groin. "Do you want to help me?"