Review Detail of Allen_Clay012 in Tales of the Vampires

The formatting is good which enables readers to differentiate from each scenes. The style is effective but I believe the separation of the scenes could be done with one or three spaces. Other than that I have no issues with the writing style. I find the story easy to read and understand. It is interesting to see the future events as the plot unfolds. I will not try to spoil readers, all I can say that the story has a good charm into it. I am rating the story 5/5 for its good storytelling. The issue I pointed out earlier was nothing serious. for a traditional reader they may find it different to the format they used to read. Grammar wise thus story has no problems with it. Thank you for introducing me your work. I appreciate it.