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2024-02-22 12:04

The story itself is good so far but the author should probably go over their chapters before they post them. Theres quite a few errors ranging from poor phrasing and word choice to Mispelling a characters name and forgetting to capitalize. You do that and my review goes from 3.8 to 4.5 stars just from that.

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Yeah i m a horrible english writer.

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ProphtLv4

I feel the need to ask this question because of the amount of confusion I have seen it cause, but what exactly do you mean no romance? 1. Absolutely zero romance what so ever 2. No romance but the mc sleeps around(and no I’m not asking for lemons but I do understand how people can find it wierd that every mc has to be a virgin no matter how old they are) 3. There will be someone he ends up with but it’s barely gonna be covered in the story. 4. (I don’t even know why they put no romance with these, probably pressured by the readers and were too lazy to change it) the romance won’t be till much later in the story or it would be a cliff hanger I’m still gonna try it either way but it’s probably best to clarify it for others

Kazuma_trash:Yeah i m a horrible english writer.
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