Item: PJO: Son of a Primordial
Rating: 2
Author: _DEKIM_

_DEKIM_Lv16mth

2024-06-11 12:02

In my opinion. Bad.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

PJO: Son of a Primordial

Joanjudo

4.6

140 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies3

JoanjudoAuthor

May I ask why so I know what to improve upon

6mth

RangoThePrudeLv4

I read it and personally the writing isn’t all that great, idk if it improved but the beginning chapters sorta turned me off to the story due to the writing

Joanjudo:May I ask why so I know what to improve upon
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5mth

JoanjudoAuthor

I think I do improve in the later chapters but thx for the feedback

RangoThePrude:I read it and personally the writing isn’t all that great, idk if it improved but the beginning chapters sorta turned me off to the story due to the writing

5mth

Other Reviews

JoanjudoAuthor

I am the author so I am obviously going to give myself five stars lol. I hope you all like my story I have enjoyed Uncle Rick’s stories since I was four so I hope to do them justice even with this cheap imitation.

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Insert_HereLv13

It is a good story it just is not for tho [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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DreokleviLv3

Seems good so far. I really like the twist in his upbringing. Probably could do with a bit more emphasis on his experimenting with what he can do with his powers, but on the bright side it doesn't seem like he just gets everything instantly handed to him or is far too powerful. Great work!

9mth

HasarianLv13

I think I took too long to write a review, and I might be biased since the Author is one of my homies, but I must say that the story is really good. The pacing, relationships and congruence with the original world are awesome, I love the powers and I really want to see where Ozzy will take us with his adventures. :)

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EverVerseLv12

I really like the MC and the pacing is also very good. I also liked the fact that the author included the other characters from the Riordanverse (Kane family) and would love to see them go on some adventure together. Lastly Please don't drop this 🥹.

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jackson_smithLv14

Joanjudo Can you please do a certain magical index fanfiction idea during PJO : Son of a Primordial and there are no certain magical index fanfics on webnovel so here’s the synopsis for the fanfic : A man dies in our world and is reborn in Certain Magical Index with all the Esper powers of Shigeo Kageyama aka “Mob”. What will he do now? Harem Kaori Kanzaki Yoshikawa Kikyo Yomikawa Aiho Kazakiri Hyouka Sherry Cromwell Orsola Aquinas Itsuwa Fukiyose Seiri Misaka Misuzu Oriana Thomson Lidvia Lorenzetti Mugino Shizuri Elizard Carissa Villian Riméa

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Lord_Shadow_GalaxyLv2

Very good. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write.

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Florian_VentreLv2

autant resté simple, j adore! bonne écriture ( relativement bien sur ) mise a jour régulière, l histoire a été bien développé pour un début, le personnage est atypique et le contexte mondiale a été évoqué de manière clair . merci

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