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Florian_Ventre
Florian_VentreLv31yr
2024-03-09 05:22

autant resté simple, j adore! bonne écriture ( relativement bien sur ) mise a jour régulière, l histoire a été bien développé pour un début, le personnage est atypique et le contexte mondiale a été évoqué de manière clair . merci

PJO: Son of a Primordial

Joanjudo
4.6
140 Chs

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Joanjudo
JoanjudoAuthor

Merci pour votre avis

1yr
Florian_Ventre
Florian_VentreLv3

suggestion : les primordiaux (nyx mise a part )ont été peu présenté dans l ensemble des fanfictions (je parle pas d un cas en particulier ou deux ), il serait intéressant d ' inventé ou de ré inventé leur comportement ou leur caractéristique . bonne continuation ( french)

1yr
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Joanjudo
JoanjudoAuthor

I am the author so I am obviously going to give myself five stars lol. I hope you all like my story I have enjoyed Uncle Rick’s stories since I was four so I hope to do them justice even with this cheap imitation.

1yr

insert_here
insert_hereLv13

It is a good story it just is not for tho [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
Dreoklevi
DreokleviLv3

Seems good so far. I really like the twist in his upbringing. Probably could do with a bit more emphasis on his experimenting with what he can do with his powers, but on the bright side it doesn't seem like he just gets everything instantly handed to him or is far too powerful. Great work!

1yr
_DEKIM_
_DEKIM_Lv1

In my opinion. Bad.😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

10mth
Hasarian
HasarianLv14

I think I took too long to write a review, and I might be biased since the Author is one of my homies, but I must say that the story is really good. The pacing, relationships and congruence with the original world are awesome, I love the powers and I really want to see where Ozzy will take us with his adventures. :)

1yr
EverVerse
EverVerseLv13

I really like the MC and the pacing is also very good. I also liked the fact that the author included the other characters from the Riordanverse (Kane family) and would love to see them go on some adventure together. Lastly Please don't drop this 🥹.

7mth
jackson_smith
jackson_smithLv14

Joanjudo Can you please do a certain magical index fanfiction idea during PJO : Son of a Primordial and there are no certain magical index fanfics on webnovel so here’s the synopsis for the fanfic : A man dies in our world and is reborn in Certain Magical Index with all the Esper powers of Shigeo Kageyama aka “Mob”. What will he do now? Harem Kaori Kanzaki Yoshikawa Kikyo Yomikawa Aiho Kazakiri Hyouka Sherry Cromwell Orsola Aquinas Itsuwa Fukiyose Seiri Misaka Misuzu Oriana Thomson Lidvia Lorenzetti Mugino Shizuri Elizard Carissa Villian Riméa

1yr
Lord_Shadow_Galaxy
Lord_Shadow_GalaxyLv2

Very good. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write. I don't know what else to write.

1yr
theorix
theorixLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
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