Constant comments from the author during and after the chapter that completely break the immersion, breaking the fourth wall, ultra short chapters + comments, so much so that you wonder if you are reading a story or a Twitter post from a Hardcore otaku. Another negative point is the unknown Pokemons, as the reader has no knowledge of them, it is easy to forget their characteristics, so the imagination of battles is harmed. Overall, it's too tiring, silly, and boring to continue.
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