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hmm, I don't like that all of his fic's cut off before reaching 30 chapters, so I don't think I'll be willing to read it unless it reaches at least 50 chapters

i love it no op cheat no dead pokemon boy parts to increase strength no potential stuff only training methods and bond over all perfect plot

Just don't drop it before chapter 50....

A Fantastic Pokémon fanfic. The Pokémon team is interesting. The premises interesting. The character is interesting. The origin story is interesting. Here’s five stars to keep you going. Thanks for the great read.

The story is incredible. Like it shouldn’t be this god but it is. The writing is great with little to no grammar errors and the world seems to have a completely different perspective than the normal franchise. The world building is simply incredible. It’s Unique and do that it truly shines. This deserves my 5 stars.

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Love it 3 chapters a day entertaining although sometimes it’s confusing how they move from one point to another it’s still enjoyable and fun to read I recommend 10/10

This is a very good Fanfic. Good storyline, good Pokémon development, training and decent pacing. The only critiques I really have are the lack of true world building for each major city before the gym battle. A lack of a human traveling companion to ground the MC and our views of the world this fic takes place in. And lastly, the pokemon battles themselves need some work.