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skyhound
skyhoundLv141yr
2024-01-29 00:50

Review a of chapter 4, It's really good despite the longer prologue. The author seem to actually care about dialogue, descriptions and actual writing that feels like a story. The characters feel natural and the pacing isn't rushed at all. Just to note chapter 4 is the first chapter that the Mc is in the world. I'll add on more of my impressions in the comments under this post once I read more. Thanks for the entertainment author.

CYOA: The Multiverse Unbound

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Capybarian
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You have my gracious thanks!

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I normally don't write reviews for my own works, but I thought I could make an exception for this one in order to set proper expectations. This story is a mix of some power fantasy most of you are already familiar with on this side of WebNovel, and some lighthearted adventures. To summarize, this is just a 'what if?' story. One that-in the beginning-I wrote for myself in order to just let the story in my head flow onto a page on the screen. As I have put in the synopsis, I plan for this work to be hundreds of chapters long. The multiverse is vast, after all, and it contains an equally vast potential for stories to be told. ATLA is just the first world of many. Don't set your expectations high. I'm not trying to write a story with a great plot or incredibly well-written characters. I think this story is pretty average in terms of what it's offering. But then again, some of you may find it to be of higher quality than I do, so don't let me burst your bubble before you've even read it.

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Wacky waving inflatable arm flailing tube man! Wacky waving inflatable arm flailing tube man! Hi, I'm Al Harrington, Lord and Master of Al Harrington's Wacky Waving Inflatable Arm Flailing Tube Man Emporium and Castle, and thanks to a mistranslated Latin text I am now currently overstocked on wacky waving inflatable arm failing tube men, and I'm passing the savings on to you! Bolster your armies numbers, scare off bandits, woo the princess of your dreams, attract a dragon. Saxon? Protect your land, take a cavalry charge, or just scare the Normans. Whatever your wacky waving inflatable arm flailing tube man needs are! So come on down to Al Harrington's Wacky Waving Inflatable Arm Flailing Tube Man Emporium and Castle! A mile past the dead pig in Hastings!

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I'll tell you what, The pure customization over YOUR own destiny is so much better than simply getting a System to guide your fate. Way better a choice than becoming a System Slave.

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I will drop 5 star before reading because of my sexiness

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I personakt dont realy like his character that much and it felas like he has to many cheats. otherwise the story is interesting and has well written dialog and characters.

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I really like the concept of the fanfic. I'm excited for the future of this novel!

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Finished the first first few chapters the author has great history of writing incredible fics, I really can’t wait to see it’s gonna come from this one. And author so excited to hear from you again.

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I would remove a star for stability of updates but removing a star from this story is an insult and im not willing to do that. I really would like more. it's only been 13 days and everyone still has it in their library, please don't abandon this story it's really good and I would really appreciate you not dropping it.

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