So i like the novel but the writing quality could use a bit of work (my spelling is worse). The story development seems to have a lot of potential (only at chapter 11). Character design i think it could use work but considering the way you are telling the story its pretty good so far, world building is interesting not much info but keeps you interested and very interesting.
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