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cat1122mthPostedSo i like the novel but the writing quality could use a bit of work (my spelling is worse). The story development seems to have a lot of potential (only at chapter 11). Character design i think it could use work but considering the way you are telling the story its pretty good so far, world building is interesting not much info but keeps you interested and very interesting.
- cat1127mthCommented
does he get beaten often?
He had never suffered such a beating! Not even his father did such a thing! - cat1128mthCommented
If you need a nerf the add that someone sealed her powers or something then have an arc about geting unsealed and the difficultys of beinging sealed also other pov’s of her servents. Maby add some betrayal idk just have fun with it. Pls no harem
You see, as I've said before, I really don't want to make this fan-fic something like the MC being overpowered from the start, because honestly, that's not much fun for me, I'm just incapable of writing an interesting book who has a super OP MC from the beginning who has no flaws and can do anything. Believe me, I tried to do this in the previous version of this book, and I just got stuck at chapter 3. That said, as I also said in previous chapters, I want to get the MC to develop to become super OP, because she's weak now (There's a reason and plot behind the reason to why she is weak now, it's not random, as most probably think. And it won't take that long for her to be Op, since her powers are broken asf) - cat1129mthCommented
Lol my brother ’s name is Rob ert and this sound like him
So robert. well robert, was an idiot. Robert was born in quiet an average family. Robert went to an average school and did average in his studies. But robert didn't want to be average. Robert being the dumb fuck he was, thought he was destined for greatness. Spoiler alert. HE WASN'T. - cat1129mthCommented
bad wish you got rid of corruption but did not ask for it to be permanent it is a onetime thing like washing your clothes, but they need to be washed regularly.
"My first wish is that all corruption in my old world is taken care of at the highest levels and that my family will be able to get over my death in a healthy manner, this would hopefully help them to become even more connected through my death and closer as a family." - cat11211mthCommentedCh 24 The Restaurant Ruckus
- cat1121yrCommentedCh 42 Violet and Challenge 1.42
- cat1121yrCommentedCh 14 Chapter 14 - An Eternal Dynasty?
- cat1121yrCommented
But i love mashed potatoes.
Such kind of knowledge was literally radioactive and it could fry your brain into mashed potatoes. - cat1121yrCommentedCh 14 Situation After One Month
- cat1121yrCommentedCh 15 Working Again
- cat1121yrCommentedCh 11 Magical community
- cat1121yrCommented
10.8
"If the punching force increases by 0.42 kilograms per hour, then for 24 hours a day I would gain… 10 kilograms!?" Lin Mo's eyes widened. - cat1121yrCommented
Lol is not true tallest person was 2.72 meters
When he opened the system panel, he saw his height was 2.7 meters - a starting point to becoming a proper giant - and even the tallest person in the world cannot reach his height. - cat1122yrCommented
as a senior in high school i can tell you that being a senior is the easiest school year i have ever had everything was so easy.
"Are you sure about this decision? The last year of high school is the hardest. It would be especially so for you. You not only have to adapt to a new environment, you also have to interact with your classmates. Some of them would be unkind to you. At the same time, you have to face the pressure of the college entrance examination. Are you ready to face all those things?" - cat1122yrCommentedCh 2 Resurrecting The Ex-Hero
- cat1122yrCommentedCh 1 G.O.D