The novella is good, but it contains something that irritates me endlessly in novellas: the author gives the main character incredible potential, but he doesn't use it fully. This is the most annoying thing one can see in a novella, and it's also the reason I lost interest and stopped reading. The main character often repeats that he needs to get stronger as soon as possible, and he has the opportunity to surpass all the cultivators on Earth in, well, a week or two at most. Here's how he can do it—two ways that the author, for one reason or another, doesn't use or ignores, explaining it with dumb reasons. The first way, of course, is to have s** with Xia Shenyi, but he foolishly doesn't do it because of some promise he made when he was naive. And now, even after realizing how much he needs power, he still uses this stupid and incredibly annoying excuse. The second way is something anyone can figure out after reading about his physique's abilities, and that is s** with virgins. With his money, looks, and strength, he could have s** with hundreds of girls in a week and raise his cultivation to the world's peak. And as for his seed allowing people to become cultivators? Who cares? Without techniques and help, these women wouldn't be able to become cultivators anyway. So, the only thing standing between him and power is his stupid restrictions, because of which, 100% someone close to him will suffer in the future. I'm not saying he should go out into the streets and find them one by one. He could have used a brothel, which could have made for an interesting storyline. He could have also used that sect of some flower people, whose master he saved in the ruins. There are plenty of opportunities, but they aren't being used.
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thankyou for the review, MC has s-- with only the person he likes... not with everyone and if he had s-- with anyone cus of forced reasons, he would try to make them his women... he is not like f--- and then leave... he takes care of his women
well I agree with the author in this one if he has sex with everyone I'll drop the novel but it's also true about the mc not having sex with the girl in artifact because of some stupid promise from the start I feel like the mc treating cultivation like a joke which is a putoff
