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Slender_0475
Slender_0475Lv56mth
2024-07-14 02:01

This is my Review of the Story..... . It's a good read for Beginners who are okay with the Tags and description given in the chapter and don't think that deeply about certain things . . . Writing Quality: 2 star ★★ There are mistakes in grammar, wording, phrases and such but not that difficult to understand. . Story Development: 3 star★★★ Pacing is very slow but it's alright because the ending of the story is just apart a small mistery of MC's origin, other than that he just have to take some more girls and powers. . Character Design: 2 star ⭐ ⭐ At the start it was going okay but at later it turned out to be bad especially MC(👎) I don't like MC's personality that much in most cases. . Updating stability: 5 star★★★★★ Author is very good at this 👍 . World Background: 2 star★★ As of now (chapter 315+ something) the details of the world are not that good needs more work on it like places, things and such. . . . ... I'm just here for the plot, some powers and artifacts other than that... . Maybe a Spoiler for some people so... : . . . . MC's personality turned out to be worst in later chapters, well depends on the people reading that, but (for me) his personality turned out to be sh* very bad at a certain chapter and him being passive against his girl is a totally different thing that is even more of a let down but I'm still reading this cause of plot, powers and artifact settings. ... . Still it's a good read for Beginners. 👍

I alone am the Honoured One!

Akkuzz_69
4.8
695 Chs

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Akkuzz_69
Akkuzz_69Author

thankyou for the review!! I will try to improve!!

6mth
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Slender_0475
Slender_0475Lv5

I'm looking forward to it

Akkuzz_69:thankyou for the review!! I will try to improve!!
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6mth
Leitoravido
LeitoravidoLv1

It's a good story, but the pace is very slow. Sometimes there are more than 10 chapters in a row talking about things that aren't that important. The protagonist is so strong but almost never fights :/.

3mth
Stranger006
Stranger006Lv4

good things take time and have patience my friend its better to read good story then a rushed one

Leitoravido:It's a good story, but the pace is very slow. Sometimes there are more than 10 chapters in a row talking about things that aren't that important. The protagonist is so strong but almost never fights :/.
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Akkuzz_69
Akkuzz_69Author

Of course, I will give 5 stars for my own novel i have practiced the Dao of shamelessness after all. *ahem* if you are looking for an OP MC with beautiful women this is for you. There will be action and more romance and slice-of-life moments. This is gonna be wholesome with many 18+ scenes. Come and read it. At least try the free chapters man!! If you have any questions drop it below!

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Mysteries_97
Mysteries_97Lv4

Throughout the heavens and earth, I Alone am the honoured one!

10mth
lucifer_2805
lucifer_2805Lv4

Haha, It's from My broh Akkuzz so all five.

1yr
Ranabir_20
Ranabir_20Lv14

It's from Akkuzz so yeah it's good so read it 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻💯[img=recommend]

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DaoistPTejFl
DaoistPTejFlLv2

This book is honestly great. There are many books with 18+ but no plot.. but this one has a good plot and also 18+. This is quite interesting seeing cultivators in the modern world and stuff... and the origin of the MC is also very mysterious. He has the top physique in the world and imo he uses it greatly. He is definitely not a simp or petty as other MCs out there and his character is very likable from the start. Perfect combo of action, cultivation, romance, a slice of life, and quite mystery with some comedy. This book is worth spending money on! Throughout the Heaven and Earth I alone am the Honoured One!! Nah I'd win!

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cult
cultLv4

YOU KNOW WHO ELSE IS THE HONORED ONE????

10mth
Akasha_D_Arcadia
Akasha_D_ArcadiaLv12

yo bro😁 just checked it out after reading that 'very very important' note in the fan ficis this your original one?

1yr
Origin_Seer
Origin_SeerLv13

A future masterpiece from a great Author Akkuzz ah......I don't have words to describe

1yr
TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

Everyday I lose more and more faith in Webnovel and it’s readers. Chapter 1 had me going to check the blurb since I only checked it out because it was recommended and didn’t read it. Why is this community so obsessed with I N cest? How can authors even stomach writing the scenes? Do they fantasize about their own mothers and sisters? 🤢🤢🤢. I like the h***m genre, but with the increasing amount of I n cest in h***m novels, I may have to go with single fl from now on bc apparently it’s too difficult to keep a family wholesome 😑. Good luck on your future writing endeavors ✌🏾

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