Slender_0475

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Slender_04756 days ago
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**right before her...
Her nostrils started to catch a dangerous scent, a familiar scent which she usually picked up when she was near him when he still obeyed. The smell was captivating, alluring, even addictive. She was going to force the slave to rat out the perfume he was using, but the source was indeed here, right before his face.
The lost son of Lilith.
Urban · Highelder
Slender_04756 days ago
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Please continue to read only if you're 18+.
The lost son of Lilith.
Urban · Highelder
Slender_0475a month ago
Replied to Highelder
by the way finnally a new Cover page 🤟👌 I liked the old one too
'But after the experience I am about to give her, she will not be the same haughty Madame Jessica anymore,' he thought as he unveiled his belt.
The lost son of Lilith.
Urban · Highelder
Slender_0475a month ago
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I meant to say that, she seems to be terrified of him a lot but up to this chapter (ch 12) there is not any moment/ situation where she would be terrified of MC as per her POV ...other than him being "Scheme-y"🤔 but can be a mistake though🤔 Using AI as proofreading is good but it's so "flowery" to read 😅
Jessica stood there, shaking with impotent rage as Kraner walked away. She wanted to scream, to throw something, to rip him apart with her bare hands. But she couldn't. Because despite everything, she knew one thing for certain: Kraner wasn't bluffing. He was dangerous. Deadly even. And if she wasn't careful, he'd crush her just like he'd crushed everyone else.
The lost son of Lilith.
Urban · Highelder
Slender_0475a month ago
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That's good 👍
'But after the experience I am about to give her, she will not be the same haughty Madame Jessica anymore,' he thought as he unveiled his belt.
The lost son of Lilith.
Urban · Highelder
Slender_0475a month ago
Replied to Daichi_TBR193
yea
Any ideas for powers, adventure arcs and girls are more than welcomed. I might not use anything, but you will have my gratitude for trying.
Ben 10: Apex Hero
Others · Daichi_TBR193
Slender_0475a month ago
Replied to Dragonkingslayer
Maybe 🤔
"Ah, the open desert!" He said, grinning as he steered the Rust Bucket forward. "There's just something about it, the vastness, the history, the mystery! You know, some folks say there are places out here where time itself acts strange. Whole towns appearing and disappearing without a trace!"
Ben 10: Apex Hero
Others · Daichi_TBR193
Slender_0475a month ago
Replied to Dragonkingslayer
Kinda same when I write a comment it always makes mistakes like missing, jumbled or different kind of words... mostly in here (Webnovel)
"Ah, the open desert!" He said, grinning as he steered the Rust Bucket forward. "There's just something about it, the vastness, the history, the mystery! You know, some folks say there are places out here where time itself acts strange. Whole towns appearing and disappearing without a trace!"
Ben 10: Apex Hero
Others · Daichi_TBR193
Slender_0475a month ago
Replied to Daichi_TBR193
Oh, I hope you don't overwork yourself Author & balance your studies & Novels 🤟
**If you guys can't believe how quickly I'm uploading these chapters, just imagine my surprise. Hopefully I'm not sacrificing too much of its quality for that faster pace, but only you guys can tell me.
Ben 10: Apex Hero
Others · Daichi_TBR193
Slender_0475a month ago
Replied to Daichi_TBR193
🤔 He is a really complicated character
Any ideas for powers, adventure arcs and girls are more than welcomed. I might not use anything, but you will have my gratitude for trying.
Ben 10: Apex Hero
Others · Daichi_TBR193