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2024-09-26 18:30

When tatsuma becomes hokage he should implement an elective system in konoha ninja academy.when students complete 6 years study in one or two years (Itachi and kakashi) or the academy can't guide them because they have already mastered and understood the curriculum they can select an elective for further studies.The electives can be-advanced academics, chakra control,ninjutsu,taijutsu,genjutsu,kenjutsu,basics of medical ninjutsu, sealing jutsu, information collection, assassination, seduction, reverse seduction etc.The person who comes first in an elective will receive an A rank jutsu and 2nd place B rank 3rd C rank and if a person manages to come 1st in all electives or most of them he/she will receive an S rank or forbidden jutsu. Tatsuma should create hostel for ninja academy students who are orphans this way their daily needs will be fulfilled (cooking, cleaning, healthcare, washing clothes,)and they can focus on training. He should establish the Eight gates squad and flying thunder god squad.If hiruzen disagrees with him he should point to orochimaru,jiraiya,minato and himself to show that civilians have great ninja talent and should be nurtured.

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