While the story starts off fine, and progresses semi fast semi slow, it has a good breath of development. The only issue is how he is somehow always at the right place and right time to pick up everyone and anything. Then the whole riser power boost spit shining was beyond stupid, as he should've just cubed and killed riser with the shrine. The fact it evolved to riser gaining powers with god tier comprehension made little to no sense. While an ambitious take on the pieces given, they're assembled like a broken jigsaw puzzle.
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