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Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor11mth
2024-01-19 21:38

Hey guys ...shameless author here! I thought about writing this novel for a bit and honestly I have some good ideas that I want to write on ink or better yet on bit.Anyway here the power system will be a bit different from usual novels , fight will play a bit more on the strategic sides rather than on skills and ability , even though these will still play a big part , so anyway I hope you like it if you do please leave a comment.

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Louxy
LouxyLv2

In my opinion, it's not a villain if there's romance or a harem. Vilao, for me, is the type of person who does everything for his goals! Does your book fit this description?

Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

yes he Is egoistic, even though he May Hide It , though It does not mean he Is outright evil , he does evil deeds not because he likes It but because they are advatageous tò him maybe I Will chang It into anti-hero

Louxy:In my opinion, it's not a villain if there's romance or a harem. Vilao, for me, is the type of person who does everything for his goals! Does your book fit this description?
Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

I put villain' because in the story I Plan tò make MC do a bit of despicable things , I am torn between anti-hero and villain' . Because he Only lend help if he either take something back or if he has some Plan for a Person tò still live for the plot. Honestly he Is egoistical and selfish even though he Hide It under smile and comedy

Louxy:In my opinion, it's not a villain if there's romance or a harem. Vilao, for me, is the type of person who does everything for his goals! Does your book fit this description?
Louxy
LouxyLv2

It doesn't need, you said correctly, a villain. So I want to know two things, is there a moral limit, which would be not doing some things to a certain extent out of pure morality (which is what doesn't fit in a true village) and another thing, is there a harem or even romance?

Allevatore_dicapre:yes he Is egoistic, even though he May Hide It , though It does not mean he Is outright evil , he does evil deeds not because he likes It but because they are advatageous tò him maybe I Will chang It into anti-hero
Louxy
LouxyLv2

sorry for the mistakes, it's google translate

Louxy:It doesn't need, you said correctly, a villain. So I want to know two things, is there a moral limit, which would be not doing some things to a certain extent out of pure morality (which is what doesn't fit in a true village) and another thing, is there a harem or even romance?
Louxy
LouxyLv2

well, a villain is really like that, but I have seen several authors use the villain tag to attract the public to their book and write an anti-hero

Allevatore_dicapre:I put villain' because in the story I Plan tò make MC do a bit of despicable things , I am torn between anti-hero and villain' . Because he Only lend help if he either take something back or if he has some Plan for a Person tò still live for the plot. Honestly he Is egoistical and selfish even though he Hide It under smile and comedy
Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

he does not have a morale limit , if It comes to die or live , but It also mean that there are some people that he Will not kill for the sake of It or get Power as he genuily care about Them , but that he would not sacrifice his Life for. Also I Plan there to be romance at the late part of the book , however take in mind that evil people sometimes care about a Person or an ideals , It May be a son or a female even a dog , many killers do have twosted morals , like not Killing children . What I mean tò Say Is that slmodt everone has a morale limit , MC too but he Is less limited by it

Louxy:It doesn't need, you said correctly, a villain. So I want to know two things, is there a moral limit, which would be not doing some things to a certain extent out of pure morality (which is what doesn't fit in a true village) and another thing, is there a harem or even romance?
Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

If you expect a MC that kills innocent for pleasure I can tell you he Is not that , obviously he Will not save innocent either all he does Is tò survive . A bit like a psycopath that does not ser people as being but as doll but that nonethrless does not want Them to get sas as they are HIS dolls , this Is how MC Will view people some people Will entertain him and he Will keep Them close and even lend a helping hand It Is not too much. As sukuna said : I Don't like It I kill It ,He entertain me I throw him a bone

Louxy:well, a villain is really like that, but I have seen several authors use the villain tag to attract the public to their book and write an anti-hero
Louxy
LouxyLv2

Not for pleasure, I was expecting a protagonist who isn't tied to anything and only has power as his objective, without romance, who wouldn't have any qualms about killing even children and wouldn't have any feelings for women and the like. It seems like your book is not my cup of tea, but I wish you good luck with your book! If you're curious, a famous book like I described is Reverend Insanity.

Allevatore_dicapre:If you expect a MC that kills innocent for pleasure I can tell you he Is not that , obviously he Will not save innocent either all he does Is tò survive . A bit like a psycopath that does not ser people as being but as doll but that nonethrless does not want Them to get sas as they are HIS dolls , this Is how MC Will view people some people Will entertain him and he Will keep Them close and even lend a helping hand It Is not too much. As sukuna said : I Don't like It I kill It ,He entertain me I throw him a bone
lolbingolol
lolbingololLv13

That’s boring bro

Louxy:Not for pleasure, I was expecting a protagonist who isn't tied to anything and only has power as his objective, without romance, who wouldn't have any qualms about killing even children and wouldn't have any feelings for women and the like. It seems like your book is not my cup of tea, but I wish you good luck with your book! If you're curious, a famous book like I described is Reverend Insanity.
lolbingolol
lolbingololLv13

Romance or harem?

Allevatore_dicapre:If you expect a MC that kills innocent for pleasure I can tell you he Is not that , obviously he Will not save innocent either all he does Is tò survive . A bit like a psycopath that does not ser people as being but as doll but that nonethrless does not want Them to get sas as they are HIS dolls , this Is how MC Will view people some people Will entertain him and he Will keep Them close and even lend a helping hand It Is not too much. As sukuna said : I Don't like It I kill It ,He entertain me I throw him a bone
Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

no harem I cqm tell you that as for romance I am still not sure

lolbingolol:Romance or harem?
Just_Franck09
Just_Franck09Lv4

What did I expect from a romance writer. 😔

Allevatore_dicapre:he does not have a morale limit , if It comes to die or live , but It also mean that there are some people that he Will not kill for the sake of It or get Power as he genuily care about Them , but that he would not sacrifice his Life for. Also I Plan there to be romance at the late part of the book , however take in mind that evil people sometimes care about a Person or an ideals , It May be a son or a female even a dog , many killers do have twosted morals , like not Killing children . What I mean tò Say Is that slmodt everone has a morale limit , MC too but he Is less limited by it
Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

Oh come on It makes sense, most evil people have a certain set of morals they live to , It Is a moral xorrupyed One but still morals

Just_Franck09:What did I expect from a romance writer. 😔
IceMonarch
IceMonarchLv4

Hey dude where did the chapters go?

Allevatore_dicapre:Oh come on It makes sense, most evil people have a certain set of morals they live to , It Is a moral xorrupyed One but still morals
Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

I add to add One so i delete everything and reposting it

IceMonarch:Hey dude where did the chapters go?
Sonu_Siraj_5546
Sonu_Siraj_5546Lv13

single fl or harem author

Allevatore_dicapre
Allevatore_dicapreAuthor

single fl

Sonu_Siraj_5546:single fl or harem author
Sonu_Siraj_5546
Sonu_Siraj_5546Lv13

thanks for confirmations

Allevatore_dicapre:single fl
Jorlat123
Jorlat123Lv14

Please make it anti hero, Pretty sure there are many who deserves to be done despicable things by him, just not innocents. I can't just seem to wish for the best to an MC who see everything as a means to an end. This is my honest plea..

Allevatore_dicapre:I put villain' because in the story I Plan tò make MC do a bit of despicable things , I am torn between anti-hero and villain' . Because he Only lend help if he either take something back or if he has some Plan for a Person tò still live for the plot. Honestly he Is egoistical and selfish even though he Hide It under smile and comedy
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