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EzorLv135mth
2024-08-31 22:19

Mc is incredibly frustrating. He just ignores a woman trying to control his mind and make him her slave MULTIPLE times. Then he lets himself get dragged around instead of going to save his beloved. From ch 31 it takes another 15 chs before he even arrives at the island where she is being kept. I’ll come back with an updated review if I pick this up again as I can see the potential.

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Legioneer_1000Author

1. He doesn't just ignore her, he warns get and forces her to stop. what exactly did you want him to do to her? kill her? 2. You can't just go into enemy territory without knowing enough about your enemy. That's why he moved around with them. Hope this makes you give the book another chance.

EzorLv13

I’ll probably give it another chance, just felt incredibly frustrated at that moment.

Legioneer_1000:1. He doesn't just ignore her, he warns get and forces her to stop. what exactly did you want him to do to her? kill her? 2. You can't just go into enemy territory without knowing enough about your enemy. That's why he moved around with them. Hope this makes you give the book another chance.
Monarch_LordLv3

bro what? obviously he should kill her, r u stupid? if someone tries to mind control you, that's the same as threatening your life..

Legioneer_1000:1. He doesn't just ignore her, he warns get and forces her to stop. what exactly did you want him to do to her? kill her? 2. You can't just go into enemy territory without knowing enough about your enemy. That's why he moved around with them. Hope this makes you give the book another chance.
Oakley_TallentLv15

it's actually worse, a threat on your life could be a bluff, but if someone has the ability to mind control you, and actually tries, they could make you do anything. That is what comes after a threat, action. Which is worse. Especially so, in that case🤦‍♂️🤷‍♂️. A psychic type like that is always dangerous to have around you, much better to dispose of anyone having that ability. It is a bit too dangerous to even think about keeping around. I mean, if you keep them around, are you doing it because that is what you want, or because they are making you believe that🤷‍♂️ scary stuff man

Monarch_Lord:bro what? obviously he should kill her, r u stupid? if someone tries to mind control you, that's the same as threatening your life..
Samhain666Lv15

agreed, he should have killed her, any sane person would have protected themself

Harsh_Kushwaha_6049Lv4

1).YES, he should I*ll her

Legioneer_1000:1. He doesn't just ignore her, he warns get and forces her to stop. what exactly did you want him to do to her? kill her? 2. You can't just go into enemy territory without knowing enough about your enemy. That's why he moved around with them. Hope this makes you give the book another chance.
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