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Dogaunt
DogauntLv48mth
2024-07-31 17:27

This novel made me certain that I have a voice in my head whenever I am reading. I don’t know if it’s a hobbit or a writing style of the author but Istg, he uses exclamation marks a log, like, a LOT I get that it probably doesn’t bother some people but man, my voice suddenly rising higher bothers me quite a bit, I don’t know if it gets better in recent chapters but I hope it does because the premise is pretty promising. Apart from the exclamation marks, the grammar is pretty good, the premise is interesting and I can see potential in this series.

Strongest Superhuman System

Legioneer_1000
4.5
853 Chs

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Legioneer_1000
Legioneer_1000Author

Hello. Thanks for the review. Sorry for the excessive exclamations, I was a rookie and for some reason, I felt the need to shout out certain points a lot. Don't ask em why, it was just silly. I'm working on fixing the previous chapters and I can assure you that it got a lot better.

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DaoistLFhmFY
DaoistLFhmFYLv15

Huge fan of this work. The fight scenes are some of the best on the platform. The characters are well developed and well written, including main, supporting, side, and antagonist characters. I e really felt the loss of almost every named character even when they are only around briefly. Story is also awesome and while the full mystery driving the story isn’t unveiled yet, I am still very impressed with how well done everything has been. MC is very cool, and I’ve never had to roll my eyes at his thoughts or actions. Even when he’s made a mistake it feels authentic to him. Finally, romance well done. Love slice of life moments showing happy times, it’s very gratifying to gain moments of joy after achieving difficult victories. Only complaint is I’d like more spicy scenes - usually not something I’m looking for in a work that’s not focused on that. However, the writer is good at these scenes, they understand power dynamics well, and could lean into more extreme and kinky aspects really well. I care about the romance and the kink and intensity makes sense for the romance that has developed so very well. Strong recommend to read it!

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Legioneer_1000
Legioneer_1000Author

Hello everyone and thank you for picking up my new story for your reading pleasure! This story will be a mix of romance, a lotta action, and system levelling. There will be boss fights, face slapping and complete domination! If you have any questions about the story then please don't hesitate to ask in the comment section below! I promise I don't bite... unless you want me to. P.S. I'm giving myself five stars just because. If you think I deserve it, then please leave a review!

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Ezor
EzorLv14

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Asmodeus_Prime
Asmodeus_PrimeLv13

Awesome book. I have no idea why it's not more popular. Make sure you read the author notes 😂

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DevilVik
DevilVikLv13

A refreshing read amidst a series of disappointing ones. From writing quality to world building, everything has been good so far. Especially the Fight scenes, it's one of those novels where you can actually imagine the fight sequence as you read on. This novel is a Hidden gem.

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Eunice_Obi_6766
Eunice_Obi_6766Lv1

Good. Good. Good. Good.😊 It's a harem, but doesn't seem rushed or forced. I think there are two wives and they each get their own arc, character development and backstory. I like it.

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D_RegalInsomniac
D_RegalInsomniacLv13

Good story. I really love fist fights so it's refreshing to see a main character that uses his fists rather than a sword or flashy magic. I'll stick with you till the story ends! Thanks for not making it a harem, I hate those.

1yr
TwistedTsunami
TwistedTsunamiLv15

It says completed. My favorite novel is complete. No more Pat cursing everyone out and me waiting on Queen to off a thot who even looks Mark’s way 😭😭😭

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Troxking
TroxkingLv15

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Hamiki
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Your story is very good but unfortunately I don't have the money to continue reading it🤣...................................Why does it take 140 words to comment🐸

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