Review Detail of MrEnigma in Fake Player

This story is quite hard to describe, you can0 call it great, good, amazing, annoying and even bad in some parts. There are no grammatical errors, at least none that I have noticed and the author did a good job connecting the MC to the Overlord world. The proggres of the story is good and now come the parts that need changing in my opinion.Never thought I'd say this but the chapters are too long, usually you read through a chapter and start a new one take a break and do something else, but here its like it never ends. I would rather the author makes chapters half of the current lenght. Also he mentioned in the beggining that the yggdrasil part would last around 5-6 chapter if I remember correctly, that was complete bullshit,theres over 25chapters and we are not even in the part where players start leaving the game. Might not seem much, but if you turn those massive chapters into normal ones, it would probably be around 100chapters of fricking prologue, which is annoying because a good portion of Overlord fanfics are dropped during the Yggdrasil part because they have a need to explain in detail the changes the MC experiences in himself and those aroung him, or shortly after they enter the new world. I don't really want to read an essay just to reach the part where he interacts with the residents of the new world.Hooefully this helps someone, and I'll be taking a break from this fic for a bit because I don't enjoy reading the chapters as much and will probably return in the future.