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MrEnigma5dReplied to WhatWhoWhereWhen new chapter?
Opinion: Rank your top three medieval fantasy animes and manhwas.- MrEnigma11dCommentedCh 502 502. Buggy's Anger
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Story dead?
Ruby smirked and interrupted him"I did!" They're actually pretty popular in the Lust ring. They make all kinds of flavours, sweaty nuts, I just nutted in your mum, we can't do this stepbro, two girls one cup....oh! and strawberry too. - MrEnigma1mthCommentedCh 497 497. Common Enemy
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You dead?
"FOR OUR BROTHERLY BOND!" - MrEnigma1mthReplied to ChaosWriter
Youd dead?
Ron took in this piece of information and stated solemnly, "If I develop Blue Flame to a level similar to Commander Marco, I will also be able to utilize it for attacking in multiple ways, just like Commander Marco. Even if I choose Logia, Flare-Flare Fruit may not be my third copied fruit." - MrEnigma1mthPosted
Its a good and finally a new MC look(its always Gojo, Jinwo and Toji, used to be Gilgamesh alot also). Grammar is good and the story development is also pretty good, now I just have one question.Is there going to be romance(please say yes but no harem please, you could pretty much make a perfect wife, kinda like the NPC-s from Overlord)?
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This story is quite hard to describe, you can0 call it great, good, amazing, annoying and even bad in some parts. There are no grammatical errors, at least none that I have noticed and the author did a good job connecting the MC to the Overlord world. The proggres of the story is good and now come the parts that need changing in my opinion.Never thought I'd say this but the chapters are too long, usually you read through a chapter and start a new one take a break and do something else, but here its like it never ends. I would rather the author makes chapters half of the current lenght. Also he mentioned in the beggining that the yggdrasil part would last around 5-6 chapter if I remember correctly, that was complete bullshit,theres over 25chapters and we are not even in the part where players start leaving the game. Might not seem much, but if you turn those massive chapters into normal ones, it would probably be around 100chapters of fricking prologue, which is annoying because a good portion of Overlord fanfics are dropped during the Yggdrasil part because they have a need to explain in detail the changes the MC experiences in himself and those aroung him, or shortly after they enter the new world. I don't really want to read an essay just to reach the part where he interacts with the residents of the new world.Hooefully this helps someone, and I'll be taking a break from this fic for a bit because I don't enjoy reading the chapters as much and will probably return in the future.
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new helluva boss chapter?
Gol. D. Roger's sword "ACE" - MrEnigma1mthReplied to inverted
Can you update amd focus on mercenary enrollment instead of this?
Hae-Jung (Chapter 33) - MrEnigma1mthReplied to
You alive?
Ruby smirked and interrupted him"I did!" They're actually pretty popular in the Lust ring. They make all kinds of flavours, sweaty nuts, I just nutted in your mum, we can't do this stepbro, two girls one cup....oh! and strawberry too. - MrEnigma1mthCommentedCh 206 Ch. 199 - Under Attack!
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Any news about a new update for ace
Ron took in this piece of information and stated solemnly, "If I develop Blue Flame to a level similar to Commander Marco, I will also be able to utilize it for attacking in multiple ways, just like Commander Marco. Even if I choose Logia, Flare-Flare Fruit may not be my third copied fruit." - MrEnigma1mthReplied to Voided_fox
Its been 2months since you last uploaded a new chapter for your qdc fanfic
Lev's mind clicked as his remaining willpower loses hold of his desire as he took off his shirt before moving closer and shoved his cock inside Mia without any warning. It seemed difficult to put it at once, probably because of his cock's enormous size but it was only after the sudden feeling that something broke, did he realize Mia was still virgin all this time. - MrEnigma1mthReplied to Voided_fox
new chapter update or dropped?
Lev's mind clicked as his remaining willpower loses hold of his desire as he took off his shirt before moving closer and shoved his cock inside Mia without any warning. It seemed difficult to put it at once, probably because of his cock's enormous size but it was only after the sudden feeling that something broke, did he realize Mia was still virgin all this time.