After reading almost half of the chapters published till now (chapter 41) here are some of the observations that I have made. The writing quality is average. It could have been better but I've read far worst. Till now, there's very little known about the world. Other than the basic setting, in everything is unknown. The story is really slow paced. Author goes back on his own words and logics when it suits him without caring about what he himself said a few chapters ago. I guess that the author has already addressed the pacing issue but it's vague at best. The MC (supposedly) hates social interaction but is overly enthusiastic when interacting with others. The dialogues feels like they were written by someone who is into playing SIM games. The interaction between characters feel unrealistic. It's like the Author doesn't know normal interaction is like. It is good to be kind and polite with others but everytime the MC interacts with others he either comes off as "Goody-two-shoes" or a flirt. That or the MC is simply very, very optimistic. There are sometimes things that don't make sense about the MC's behaviour. There is the same issue with the other characters too.
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