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Kilaske
KilaskeLv61yr
2024-02-04 19:14

Sorry but this novel has too low of a rating for this level of writing. It's not that bad to be a 3 star. Seriously. I've read worse. Maybe not 5 star, but definitely not 3. Yes at the early chapters the writing seems a little bit confusing, but the later chapters were smooth to read. Was a little put off that MC actually was getting too close with the kids, but he did later say that it won't let him impede what he's going to do in the future. Also those saying he's being too biased and hating the League too much is the one being weird. MC doesn't really hate the League members too much; he even says that he looked up to them when he was a kid, but now that he's actually living in that world, you can kinda see where it gets a little bit hypocritical and understand MC's views. Was also getting kinda nervous when he was getting close to the doctor, but thankfully he didn't fully commit and the relationship is still okay. So again, for those who are turned off by the review and rating, give this novel a chance, since it's not that as bad as people are claiming. Those people are exaggerating.

Dc: start in Young Justice

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4.4
35 Chs

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Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

Are there any romance in the story or outside activities

1yr
Vixdraconen
VixdraconenLv14

did you get an answer?

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211:Are there any romance in the story or outside activities
1yr
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Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

No

11mth
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TheGreatGod
TheGreatGodLv4

What about now?

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211:No
4mth
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Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

No

TheGreatGod:What about now?
4mth
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Xilver
XilverLv14

how about now?

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211:No
4mth
1
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

This is for everyone in the future wanting the same answer as me If I did get the answer it would be visible for everyone but sadly I haven’t gotten a answer yet

Xilver:how about now?
4mth
Kilaske
KilaskeLv6

SPOILER ALERT!!!!!! lol I stopped reading after leaving this review. Just started back at it again today. Yes there is romance, even a harem.

Kobus_Liebenberg_4211:Are there any romance in the story or outside activities
4mth
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Kobus_Liebenberg_4211
Kobus_Liebenberg_4211Lv14

Haha I thought you forgot about this story but I welcome you back with open arms and anticipat your next steps in this journey

Kilaske:SPOILER ALERT!!!!!! lol I stopped reading after leaving this review. Just started back at it again today. Yes there is romance, even a harem.
4mth
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_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv12

You have started out pretty good to be honest, But the narrative is all over the place makes me feel like mc is a chaotic neutral being. But the rest is pretty much fine can't wait for more updates

1yr

GodOfLight
GodOfLightLv1

The story is good, but the forced plots that the author does are starting to irritate me a little, which disappoints me, so I will give a slightly low rating this time, but will not remove the 5 star from another review

1yr
YourDad_
YourDad_Lv5

What the f, man. Why this book has so many bad reviews. It's not the best there is, writing needs huge improvements - Character & story can be developed a bit more perfectly - BUT Still it's good. I don't even know how people in this platform thinks🤷‍♀️🤷‍♀️

1yr
KIKOwoods_gaming
KIKOwoods_gamingLv4

great job so far and hope you continue to make this story.

1yr
Ayden12g
Ayden12gLv4

The grammar is pretty dreadful along with having nonsensical plot points which makes it a pretty ruff read.

1yr
merocamero
merocameroLv4

A good story where MC explores the world and doesn't turn into a superhero or idiotic edge lord. In fact, it's almost unique in the sense that dude simply says that he has more important things to do and just making a profit while having fun along the way.

1yr
cfif_ybrekby
cfif_ybrekbyLv1

really like! completely different from others and gives variety! Usually everyone is a hero/vigilante/villain, but this one is just neutral! Also strong and smart! This is how an MC should be! The wishes are chosen very cleverly and without “inexplicable” protection, which should not be there! the pedigree of Doomsday and the Martian is simply Imba and why has no one written about it? traveling through the worlds is just the icing on the cake!

1yr
DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

Grammar falls apart when the MC tries to hate on heroing, the justice league, or when trying to throw shade at anyone. has a very distorted perspective of them (JL) as a whole, not comic accurate but from fanfics with authors who hate their own lives. Hes OP but plays at being some random clone under the nose of the JL. not my thing. not in this manner. ill try and keep reading and change this review if it gets better.

1yr
LastGod
LastGodLv5

was really good till the end. Nothing mattered in the end he just left EVERYONE and went to a new universe like its nothing. AGAIN i say it all the time op characters have to have meaningful relationships to keep them apart of the world. u did good for awhile with the team and roquette but once u started traveling to other worlds it all started to unravel. and now u have to start over in a new universe. Cause no more ideas. Slice of life is what is needed. But im not really seeing hw a different world will fix this fanfic.

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