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systemwriterKLv138mth
2024-03-19 07:57

it s a good idea but for me the jail and the ultra long simulation is too much, whatever the case a jail in a cultivation world ? at least the jail of a little sect so there can be some movements or something and 30 pages for 24 h shows how tiring it is personaly, other may like it but fantasy makes you want to see brighter things not jails and cells. i mean i hope to see faster movement toward the story and not i cultivate in a cell until i kill everyone or i can finally teleport out. sad because the start was good with the old man thingy, can t you skip at least a bit ? i hope that helps for a rewiew i read so much books but i know it s hard to write one, guild wars was good i guess but jail it s too much. anyway good luck

Immortal Simulation

Kotario
4.5
258 Chs

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Kotario
KotarioAuthor

Interesting. thanks for sharing

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Sonu_Siraj_5546
Sonu_Siraj_5546Lv13

Why is 2 Female leads in the sheet if the tags no harem?

Kotario:Interesting. thanks for sharing
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Kotario
KotarioAuthor

Novel has single wife romance only. The other two try but are rejected, but are also somewhat intergral to the plot. Hmm, i should probably make them main characters instead l. 🤔

Sonu_Siraj_5546:Why is 2 Female leads in the sheet if the tags no harem?
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kaban
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great novel, loved all the world background, people may think it’s slow paced since at chapter 100 barely a week has passed but i think the author took his time to setup the foundation of the novel, and it turned out great. the writing quality is ok aside from minor typos: changing the mc name from Dalvin to Dante (his other novel), minor misspelling in genders (he/she) one thing that I would like to point out is that although this novel has a no harem tag, every single woman that appears is supposedly hot and the author spends a lot of time repeating that, which gets quite annoying tbh, like come on man you can do better fml characters😅 aside from that pretty unique novel, a different turn on system and cultivation

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gage5021
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If you enjoy well developed worlds, attention to detail, and an author that keeps readers up to date, I bid you welcome. I enjoy cultivation novels and my only complaint is that I can’t skip ahead in time and get my chapter fix early😫.

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LazyCant
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This authors books are always interesting, good start to this one will have to wait till more chapters are released to review properly but what chapters are out are very good and drew me into the story.

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Daoist_CloudySky
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M O R E. . . FEED ME MORE, I like it very much keep the updates rolling😃👍

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SilentSorcerer
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I never read cultivation novels so this is a first for me and I really enjoyed I hope the updates come quickly and with the same quality. If people can recommend me other cultivation novels with the same quality that would be great.

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GhostVillage
GhostVillageLv4

The novel is quite good, the biggest plus point is that the Main Character is not a typical arrogant protagonist who goes mad with power 2 seconds after getting a power up.Moreover, he is also not a young master esque character not yet at least (I have read till chapter 90). So for that I give this book a 4.4, (points deducted for some writing errors and update stability and a some plot holes).But keep up the good work author.

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Mho996
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Good read but I gotta pay... 😔

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_ozdogan_
_ozdogan_Lv3

Reveal spoiler

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Potent_Venom
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This book is freaking fire, also don't pay attention to the review that talked about the jail and long simulations. The Simulations aren't that long and the jail interactions are funny. If you read the 36 chapters that I did and don't feel the same way then I give you permission to rest me in the replies.

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