its too cringe. reads like a wattpad novel where the mc immediately goes to Gringotts and gets a bunch of noble titles and lordships. mc is addressed with 5 noble names or something at his sorting as he "struts forward confidently to the sorting hat as he is destined for greatness" ok bro, everything was handed to you congrats. everything is designed to make the mc look cool or mature but it doesn't work, he just seems like a delusional retard
Agwinz
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