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Warlock12
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2024-01-24 19:37

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RE: Eragon (old version)

Undeadwizard7
4.7
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DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14

Only read two other good eragon stories but they ended before they even got going. im hoping this one can last because I love it so far. honestly my standards are easy to hit just because I've come across so few to judge but all the better. if you start getting bored then spice it up, throw him in LotR, wheel of time, or game of thrones for an arc, these are all compatible worlds. anything to keep the drive alive, im already a fan.

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Undeadwizard7
Undeadwizard7Author

Selfish author giving themselves a 5 star review. but seriously, this has been a passion project in my free time and have finally decided to release it to the world.

11mth
TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv4

Lot of plot holes and forcing of the plot. If you haven't read the books then you might like it. Magic users of any skill are all, very literally, telepathic mind readers in this world. So the moment the MC met Brom and wasn't immediately caught I knew this wasn't for me.

11mth
Four95
Four95Lv14

I love Eragon. It is one of my favorite book series. I hope the author keeps this story alive as there are not enough Eragon stories here.

11mth
kamran_ein
kamran_einLv15

not many eragon fics, so far it has been amazing. Your character is well made and not some edge lord, or emo, keep up the good work author 👍

11mth
OriontheGreat
OriontheGreatLv5

I love eragon so much, need more! love it so far! keep it coming.

11mth
William_White_8317
William_White_8317Lv15

I love you and everything right now. Keep it up.

11mth
Vanhelm
VanhelmLv4

oh haven't seen anything about Eragon in years hope it's good.

11mth
Nobody770
Nobody770Lv13

It is good keep going♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

8mth
Piotr_Uklejewski
Piotr_UklejewskiLv4

5 stars because I can. :-P A very good story, it has its problems but there is always something to improve, it's always worth listening to the opinions and ideas of others, but don't let them destroy what you want to create.

8mth
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