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The amount of reading i have done for novels is +6k hours but thsi is my favourite. This is the type if novel that you will recall even later on in life. Every time i refresh my Library and see this update it never fails to put a smile on me wheather i have just woken up and need to get ready for uni or am just tired. Thx author for this novel!!

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It is a good first few chapters. The only thing I'm complaining about is whether the characters are either thinking or talking. I couldn't move past the first 2 chapters because of it. The premise is good, but please fix it (I'll delete this comment and review after the author fixes it).

If your wondering if you should read this, it’s a no from me mc is supposedly op to all heck but gets sidelined by hajime the entire story and the mc legit does nothing like if he wasn’t there nothing would change that plus the fact author has a hard on for hajime and gives him all the girls minus shizuka (who I wouldn’t be suprised goes with him too) the writing quality is abysmal and the entire story is told as if someone is writing it down rather than experiencing it 0/10 would not recommend (p.s. I read this on my alt account that’s why it says I have chapters read)

Trash, mc with no thought of his own, acts like a pet, and a background character, trash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trashtrash, trash, trash

The story had a lot of potential, it started well, but then Hajime falling just went from bad to worse. In addition to Yue not going to the MC's harem, the MC basically remained as a background character.

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