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DaoistOfeOTALv48mth
2024-08-09 21:46

If your wondering if you should read this, it’s a no from me mc is supposedly op to all heck but gets sidelined by hajime the entire story and the mc legit does nothing like if he wasn’t there nothing would change that plus the fact author has a hard on for hajime and gives him all the girls minus shizuka (who I wouldn’t be suprised goes with him too) the writing quality is abysmal and the entire story is told as if someone is writing it down rather than experiencing it 0/10 would not recommend (p.s. I read this on my alt account that’s why it says I have chapters read)

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Author_for_fun
Author_for_funLv4

I had a feeling he'd be Hajime's beta. Thanks for saving me time

HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

I wouldn't be surprised if you actually hadn't read the book cause your review is both misleading and wrong as hell

Mi_Mika
Mi_MikaLv13

His review is correct,without mistake all he said is correct.

HugoGreyrat:I wouldn't be surprised if you actually hadn't read the book cause your review is both misleading and wrong as hell
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

i believe him , dude gives off massive fanboy energy from the synopsis. lol MC wouldn't go after protagonists girls , the heck ? that single thing itself makes it a red flag , it was better for him to write a Yaoi story so he could be with the protagonists since he likes them so much

HugoGreyrat:I wouldn't be surprised if you actually hadn't read the book cause your review is both misleading and wrong as hell
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

Ok… I mean sure you haven’t read a single chapter and I’ve read all of them but sure

Life_sa_Beach_:i believe him , dude gives off massive fanboy energy from the synopsis. lol MC wouldn't go after protagonists girls , the heck ? that single thing itself makes it a red flag , it was better for him to write a Yaoi story so he could be with the protagonists since he likes them so much
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

Tell me one thing Does he let Hajime follow the orginal plot and get all the girls?

HugoGreyrat:Ok… I mean sure you haven’t read a single chapter and I’ve read all of them but sure
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

no Hajime does not get all the girls and although it follows plot roughly it does divert and make changes

Life_sa_Beach_:Tell me one thing Does he let Hajime follow the orginal plot and get all the girls?
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

what happens to Tio the M dragon?

HugoGreyrat:no Hajime does not get all the girls and although it follows plot roughly it does divert and make changes
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

She gets with Hajime but mc gets Tohru from Dragon maid anime

Life_sa_Beach_:what happens to Tio the M dragon?
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

Tohru from another anime an OC while the main heroine is given to the MC....... Th other dude wasn't wrong... This really is next lvl throating. not touching the MC's oh harem what kind bs is that?

HugoGreyrat:She gets with Hajime but mc gets Tohru from Dragon maid anime
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

OC..?

Life_sa_Beach_:Tohru from another anime an OC while the main heroine is given to the MC....... Th other dude wasn't wrong... This really is next lvl throating. not touching the MC's oh harem what kind bs is that?
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Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

Is Tohru not an orginal character? Although she exists in Dragon maid she isn't a part of Arifureta. Dude could have easily added Dragon maid world if this is a multiverse. but he just had to throat Hajime like a good boy

HugoGreyrat:OC..?
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HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

How is tohru an original character if they aren’t a original character… actual moron

Life_sa_Beach_:Is Tohru not an orginal character? Although she exists in Dragon maid she isn't a part of Arifureta. Dude could have easily added Dragon maid world if this is a multiverse. but he just had to throat Hajime like a good boy
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Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

you moron, he just gave all the girls in Arifureta to Hajime and you are defending it with ur bs logic . The dude above said the truth , but when you crawled out of the wood work to defend him like some safe with your cryptic words , I thought there must be some misunderstanding. but as it turns out it's just dq sucking the original protagonist like a lackey. " Sorry Hajime-sama for even thinking of stealing your supposed soul mates who apparently don't have any prior relationship with you " That is the vibe this novel gives. Throat it harder

HugoGreyrat:How is tohru an original character if they aren’t a original character… actual moron
Life_sa_Beach_
Life_sa_Beach_Lv12

Instead of answering the question you are just going around in Circles. Did the pu**y mc give all the relevant female leads of Arifureta to Hajime ? When he could have just done whatever he wanted. Yes or no ? We basically have an MC who worships the very path Hajime walks on. " Forgive me Hajime-sama! for even daring to gaze at your woman! "

HugoGreyrat:I wouldn't be surprised if you actually hadn't read the book cause your review is both misleading and wrong as hell
HugoGreyrat
HugoGreyratLv14

I wanted this conversation to be over last week but sure let's talk about it mc: gets with Shea, Shizuku (2 girls from the original harem), Myu's mam and Tohru Hajime: Yue, Kaiori and Tio PLEASE explain your thought process when you said mc gets with none of the original characters, I want you try and describe what goes on in that incel clusterfuck head of yours

Life_sa_Beach_:you moron, he just gave all the girls in Arifureta to Hajime and you are defending it with ur bs logic . The dude above said the truth , but when you crawled out of the wood work to defend him like some safe with your cryptic words , I thought there must be some misunderstanding. but as it turns out it's just dq sucking the original protagonist like a lackey. " Sorry Hajime-sama for even thinking of stealing your supposed soul mates who apparently don't have any prior relationship with you " That is the vibe this novel gives. Throat it harder
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