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Whadyamean
WhadyameanLv41yr
2024-04-05 10:20

The story and premise is good, but overall is a terrible reading experience. Grammar and sentence structure is so horrendus tha an AI would do a better job writing a story. I have to filter the text I’m reading like I’m reading a Xuxia cultivation novel x2, it’s that bad. The conflict in the story is also terrible as there’s no tension, or worry as the terrible writing quality draws from the experience. This story would be interesting if there was an editor to fix all the mistakes. However I tried and I can’t read any further the grammar and way everyone interacts, talks and thinks is borderline robotic. I made it to chapter 62 before stopping thinking it’d get better, it dosen’t

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Daoist_Dan
Daoist_DanLv10

I think there is a better version. Pray for us priest or something like that.

Tommy_Wood
Tommy_WoodLv14

'priest, pray for us' is the better version

Ashinydecapod
AshinydecapodLv13

i'll give it a try and come back here to rant. thanks for the heads up.

Whadyamean
WhadyameanLv4

I pray you don’t lose any brain cells

Ashinydecapod:i'll give it a try and come back here to rant. thanks for the heads up.
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