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Very cool story. It might be a bit early to definitively rank everything, but I certainly like where it is going. The quality is fantastic, and I can really feel the world at work around the characters. I just have some recommendations from a fellow author. 1. Synopsis! It's actually one of the most important aspects of a novel. I'd heavily recommended adding one. 2. Your update speed isn't bad but webnovel usually prefers more chapters that are a bit smaller. You definitely don't have to, this is just some advice, but maybe break up some of the longer chaps into shorter ones.

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