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    Replied to Destroyer3000

    Good question. Somehow when I planned the story out I completely forgot about semblances. I guess I'll go back to the drawing board and try to come up with a cool one. It definitely wont be overpowered but hopefully I can make something that works and probably implement it pretty soon.

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    Replied to Phylonemios

    Thanks for the comment! I hope what I have planned for Sans will be cool, he will definitely play a role in stopping the resets. The next 3 chapters should focus on him some more so stay tuned.

    Ch 12 Papyrus (Part 1)
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    Replied to Konrad_The_Fourth

    The best answer I have for now if that I might be 1/5 of the way through the story I want to tell in the underground. I have most of it planned out but not the exact number of words/chapters it will take so this is subject to change.

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    Replied to Rintran_Tran

    Thank you for the review. It will definitely become more relevant when he has access to more of the underground. I just wanted to avoid him somehow having memorized the entire script of the game or how all the attacks work.

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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to Entity_Blank

    He won't, at least for a while. Right now he has to focus on mastering justice and perseverance. But anything more than that would be spoilers.

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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to Sorrias

    Thank you!

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    Replied to TheSystemFan

    At base he is getting slightly more powerful but a lot more skilled in using it. It will probably be shown when he goes against more normal monsters in the next couple chapters and not only boss monsters.

    Ch 10 Departure
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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to MF_DOOM

    How about no *snaps neck*

    Ch 10 Departure
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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to Max_Dissapointment

    Sorry, not trying to make everyone suffer. It was just exhausting trying to do this exposition in the normal conversation format. The rest of the story will not be like this.

    TORIEL: If you want to understand what magic is and how to learn it, you first must understand the SOUL. The SOUL is the source of everyone's magical power; it acts as a generator and storage for all magical energy that living beings use. While there is some magic in the air, it is so spread out that it would be almost entirely useless. In fact, the longer you try to manifest a magical attack, the more energy it leaks into the air. There are some exceptions to this; however, they are rare.
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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to Daijena

    That it also how I normally prefer Frisk but I have no confidence in writing that, so sorry. And Chara is not currently with them. My take is that it was Frisk's determination that awakened Chara originally.

    "I can't remember my name, but I can still remember everything else about my life. What sort of cliche reincarnation BS is this?" Frisk huffed to himself before starting to try and walk while thinking. This was slightly hindered by the fact that he was now much smaller than before. When he went to sleep, he had been 6 feet tall and 17 years old. Now Frisk had to learn how to walk while maybe 5 years younger and definitely more than a foot shorter.
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    Replied to VeryNooby

    In canon, I doubt it? Not exactly stated but Undyne does have determination enough to bring her back to life. And she didn't overpower Flowey's control over the timeline. In my story I am admittedly probably buffing Flowey. Its not exactly known how powerful he is without the SOULS so I just put him at the higher end. Meaning someone who doesn't posses the determination soul trait will be unable to naturally overpower his control of the timeline.

    Ch 3 Training Arc
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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to HatefulRaijin

    WORM is a web serial written by Wildbow. It's a pretty grimdark superhero story about Taylor, A girl who can control bugs as her power. Personally I think its great and would recommend reading it so I wont completely spoil it here. But it is not required to understand this story. It also has a pretty great fanfiction scene over on spacebattles.

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  • Tempest2077
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    Hello this is the shameless author review that I am rewarding myself with for getting to 15K+ words. But I will also try and give a pretty fair review of my work. Writing quality would probably be around 3 star normally, but I have multiple grammar checkers and I also think I have been improving lately. I've even started to enjoy reading my own work (and I have pretty high standards) Stability of updates is a full 5 stars. It's the summer after my senior year of High school and I have ran out of things to read. So these updates should be pretty steady for at least a couple more months. Higher for the initial week and should stable out at like 3, 4, or 5 per week depending on work. Story development is a 5. Why would I write some story I didn't think was a 5? This story has pretty much evolved over the course of months in my head and days writing summaries before it came to the novel world. Character Design... its Undertale enough said. Just kidding I could probably use some work describing characters so a 4 works. Also just Undertale. Later on the world will expand with more of my original ideas but for now we are in Undertale.

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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to Onxio

    Still not 100% on if or when MC will be going to earth bet. But the massive amount of parahumans triggering and other things will occupy their time on home world. Right now it’s about 2-3 years before the events of canon worm. And MC doesn’t even have a form of dimension travel yet. So it will most likely take a while for them to get there. I don’t have any concrete plans for them interacting with Taylor yet. But that could change in the future. This doesn’t mean that earth bet problems won’t be coming to his world though.

    "Yes, yes. Well, I think it's time for you to go to bed now. So hurry along." She closed her book and set Frisk back down on the floor.
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    Replied to Classic_sans

    Thanks for the review! Hopefully I can keep it up.

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    Replied to Onxio

    Right now I plan for when he gets to the surface there is going to be ‘second wave parahumans’ drawback from the worm cyoa. So a ton of people will trigger and connect this world with the worm multiverse. And yes magic will be a very out of context problem for the shards. How long it stays like that depends.

    "Yes, yes. Well, I think it's time for you to go to bed now. So hurry along." She closed her book and set Frisk back down on the floor.
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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to Phylonemios

    Thanks!

    Ch 5 Frisk Character Sheet
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    Replied to Ophelia_

    Thanks for the review! While most of the major story beats will be different, in the end it will be a pacifist run.

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  • Tempest2077
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    Replied to Alastors

    Thanks for the comment! Hopefully I’ll get the next chapter out today or tonight.

    Ch 3 Training Arc
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    Replied to Onxio

    I always kind of thought that perseverance was a part of determination. With determination being so powerful it kinda makes sense that it is made through using all of the soul types equally. (Keep in mind none of this is canon) I don’t really think Sans having perseverance would make too much of a difference. It would be pretty cool and I guess it would depend on whether you think Sans can remember the resets. Thanks for the comment.

    The 30th fight felt significant somehow. Frisk's eye almost hurts from how hard it is burning. He can feel the energy flowing throughout his body, similar to and reinforcing his Aura. Frisk somehow knew that he was on the verge of a breakthrough, and it would come during this fight.
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