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Review Detail of Golias in Konoha: I have a clone in One Piece

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Golias
GoliasLv52mthGolias

I read the Raw, like 90 chaps, that is what i think about the history: 1. there is a lot of incorrect information, whether about one piece or Naruto. 2. The plot starts off as a slow progression story where the mc would slowly improve in both worlds, guess what, it was sped up out of nowhere at some point and the powers are introduced as. "He learned and that's it", doesn't show anything about skill creation and learning. 3. A cute little girl who refers to herself by name, just a standard mob, suddenly starts giving off Yandere vibes, killing with a cold face, only to return to the mc with a naive and innocent smile. 4. The MC started to present an Orochimaru vibe, again out of nowhere, as if he was playing with the world due to his power, wanting to put creatures from One Piece in Naruto, like King of the Seas, just because he finds it interesting. 5. The plot will probably go in the direction of multiversal domination while playing with his ant farm, just a guess.

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Konoha: I have a clone in One Piece

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Golias
GoliasLv5Golias

It was actually more of an exhibition critique, it seems negative because I myself didn't like those facts, but if it's your cup of tea, just drink it happily, brother.

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Gratiz_
Gratiz_Lv2Gratiz_

It's like we read two different fics...