Grammar? I see no errors. Updates? Consistent, and the Author hasn't dropped the story! Plot and development?? Not too fast and not too slow, speeds up at just the right times, and slows down at just the right times, also awesome world building! Character development and powers?? Perfection! Yin is OP but not too OP, not one of those MCs that just go somewhere or do something and then they have god power or something like that. Ghislaine being in this masterpiece, The Yuri, and the fact that the action scenes go perfectly with any type of hype music you play, is the icing on the cake, the cherry on top, just, *chefs kiss* also idk why people rate this novel one star because they think the Author uploads chapters too slowly, like seriously?? The Author is a human being too guys, they have limits to what they can do.
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