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Aliiireza
AliiirezaLv41mthAliiireza

The problem is that almost all technology stories are in a hurry to use advanced technology. Before this MC was average to the bottom of the class, you can improve your studies, but you cannot become an inventor within 1 month. He makes something that is 4.5 times better than the whole world, which is not compatible with reason. There is also a young rich girl who comes to invest in your card. Among all the technological novels that I have read so far, there was one that did not progress all at once, but slowly progressed, but I have not found another one like it. (Google Translate)

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Building a Business Empire with my Technological System

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novelmeister
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Yes, the trend amongst writers on this platform is to compromise character and world integrity for a grand show of theatrics, like a character awakening power instantly or achieving a goal that would take years in a few chapters, simply for reader retention because readers these days hop out of a story if there isn’t a major event every few chapters.