99% is a copy of a Chinese novel that I read about 2 years ago, but I don't remember the name, if you are copying, at least remove the Chinese name.

The problem is that almost all technology stories are in a hurry to use advanced technology. Before this MC was average to the bottom of the class, you can improve your studies, but you cannot become an inventor within 1 month. He makes something that is 4.5 times better than the whole world, which is not compatible with reason. There is also a young rich girl who comes to invest in your card. Among all the technological novels that I have read so far, there was one that did not progress all at once, but slowly progressed, but I have not found another one like it. (Google Translate)

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The novel is very good, I enjoyed reading it until chapter 116 But as far as I have read, there are some flaws that I myself did not like The stereotype of slapping in the face to Chinese novels that no one really likes. I don't know why the authors still write this. Second, it shows that all the children of the powerful, rich family are stupid and jealous, and that they use the resources of the family's wealth and power, as if they are doing something bad themselves, isn't his brother helping him? write like this Thirdly, they say that he is lucky, well, he is lucky, why should you be upset, as if you created everything with your own efforts.

No one asks him, how did you build thousands of companies and people working alone in a few months???? Let's not write any story that has some logic.

Why because you didn't like it???

It is a Google translation, I don't know English

We were freed from the translated Chinese novel, you came to write in English, why not consider logic in every novel, instead of taking China to the top of the world, China is great, China... do thousands of other things. How many countries did you sell in the first episode?

We were freed from the translated Chinese novel, you came to write in English, why not consider logic in every novel, instead of taking China to the top of the world, China is great, China... do thousands of other things. How many countries did you sell in the firs chapter?

Whenever someone writes a story about Avatar, he is either native of the Fire Nation, or he is a native of the fire nation. Avatar's lick dog becomes 3 naive children who only growl. They should all be killed first.

This character of yours is not an evil creation, you crazy idiot wants to destroy everyone when she is not strong, she insults a few families who are as strong as themselves.

I don't know where the writers and imaginary salesmen come from. I have never been to any type of clothes in any store, and someone would treat them like this. These things can only be found in the illusions of Chinese stereotypes.

I don't know why the writers insist on having a naive and dumb mc that anyone who has read the novel for a while hates him. Why really???????

He went outside until he got a chance, wait until you get stronger or the dungeon gets bigger, then go, as if a 6-year-old is curious about everything

wanda for the win

So far, I have read up to chapter 440. How can I say that I get bored. After reading 50 chapters, there is no exciting or interesting point to encourage me to continue, but it is wrong. I personally do not like it. 1. The time does not count correctly, from the time he wakes up to the time he goes to the spiritual competition, it is about 2 years, but his age is shown as 16 years and 4 months. Until now, I am reading and it continues like this. It is as if the author is afraid that the age of MC will increase, you will be level 50, you are 1600 years old. I don't know what he is afraid of 2. Like most novels, the author is in a hurry to raise the level, but then he slows down a lot until they reach level 50 at about 20.25 years old, but then they do not reach the next level 60 until they are 600.700 years old or more. Now the author says that he needs a lot of energy to upgrade. At that level, they must be much stronger than the previous level 40, but level 44 kills a level 50 person, this does not match. 3. Like all Chinese novels, the first novel is a wretched person at the lowest level of society. It can be mc. Well, you don't want it to be a big background. At least you would have given it an average. If his father was alive or he went with his mother, he would have progressed in the cult instead of developing in the worst place that the author thinks. Find out, the author's argument is that he doesn't progress himself, the cult takes freedom, everything is demanded of him, well, do you want to go and shout, I have the whole inheritance of a god, they will take it from you, take it from you, now his freedom has not been prevented, every day he has to worry about being discovered, others attacking him or This way and that way It's okay to spend resources on a talentless person, what's the use for him. Or he didn't go with his mother, he waited until his strength was strong, he went to create a better place of strengthAs far as I have read, this novel is recommended for reading, I hope the author will do better for the next chapters.

Wasn't it supposed to be difficult to have children, how come she has 3 sons in less than 10 years?

So far, I have not read the story you are telling, but as long as you want it to be Chinese, I will get hives in every novel where China is mentioned.

exceptionally well written So far one of the best Fan fics ................................................................................................

One of the best novels I read in my 7 years of read The slapping scene is not a cliché scene The speed of the story and when the mc starts practicing is great, I liked this very much, I don't know why some writers want to make the strongest character of the mc in 2 to 3 years, they can't write a more logical one, for example, the most genius person needs 1000 to reach a certain power If you have time, MC will arrive in 5 years Monogamy, as far as I have liked, is not unreasonable mc is not very unique, it gets strong fast with its pushcara thalas