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2024-06-09 21:41

The setting is great and the build up of the main character is amazing and spending so much time working on the characters development makes this the right one for me. The wording is great for it being a second language for the author to write. Chapters are daily being added to this novel. The work the main character is putting in to become the best possible is great not enough main characters work as hard and he is for his skills. The work he is putting in and being rewarded for the hard work to improve constantly. I can relate to the main character and the struggle he goes through. This is a novel that grabs your attention and pulls you into the world of the novel.

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thank you so much!

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